The edge of endless water drew her closer, ever closer. It
lapped at her bare, dirty feet, at though it might wash her pure of the barren
land that coated her skin. As she looked on the rolling, dark waves, the dust
cleared away in streaks under her drowning eyes, and the ocean cleansed her
feet, and she was ankle deep in a life brand new.
Before her in a small boat awaited the king who dared ransom
her, smiling with a wild love that scared her more than the deep sea ever
could. And further out, too far for her weary arms to swim, was a ship with
sails that laughed at the call of the wind and danced to the tune of distant
lands.
To step, ragged and most undignified, into that boat meant
farewell to everything, perhaps her own life. She didn’t know what lay beyond but
the freedom that glistened in the eyes of him who had saved her told her this
was a chance at life that few people would ever see….
With another glance back at the bustling streets and milling
crowds as they wandered with empty smiles and empty lives, she smiled sadly and
stepped into a choice that could lead to death or life, suffering or joy, but a
choice she knew would lead to a story worth telling.
[First draft excerpt of a story I'm finally putting to paper. I wanted to get the theme portrayed in a couple of paragraphs.]
Ooooooohhhhh I love it.
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